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You already know what I think about this. Finish chapter 16.
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Thanks! Really though, I have to give proper credit to Loyal. I'm just along for the ride, adding in a few bits and catching typos.
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Ho crap fancy pants
Ooooh. So THAT'S why Fancypants wasn't satisfied!
Luna used Fleur's name all throughout the session, on a public stage... and then Fleur acts surprised when Luna uses her name in the showers? I dun get it
Also, Fancy Pants? Oh FUCK! (and not in a good way either)
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No, that was a name-swap that I missed. Should be Cerulean there, not Fleur. I'll make sure that gets fixed pronto.
Thanks for the catch, and sorry for the oversight. :)
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Other uses of Fleur's name I found that I think are out of place, given the context
4232703 Ack! Damn, one of us (likely me) must have made a copy-paste botch. My apologies. :(
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I've fixed all of these errors. There should only be one point near the end of this chapter where Luna refers to FLeur in dialogue. THanks for pointing them out ^.^
wow you play with us too, don't you Loyal !!!
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feelt like there were quit a lot >__< (maybe it's just my bad english and i missed stuff out)
4231184 nice topgun reference there !
keep going Loyal !
That cliff hanger...didn't see that coming. Again your writing is like art, I enjoyed every bit of it. But now I'm dying to read the next chapter. WHY?
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still two more:
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Got those two, keep them coming!
Dun dun dun cliff hangar. Hahaha enjoying it so much. So much story. Loyal check out the story "to love the moon" the writing is fairly similar like yours and you might like it. Cheers
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Let it go, can't hold it back anymore
......god dammit frozen. Now i feel like making a really awkward bdsm parody.
Fuckin' FANCY PANTS?! Why?! Why didn't I see that coming? It seems so obvious now! Damn it... I just feel like I should've known from the beginning he would've come out as loving bdsm. Good job bro, you've blindsided me thoroughly and I could not be happier.
Fancy Pants...
poor poor Fleur
awesome cliffhanger. cant wait for the next chapter
... Well crap.
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Your wish to see Fancy get knocked down a few pegs? Well, the latest chapter is going to be uploaded soon, and all I'll say is: We hope your wish has been granted to a satisfactory level.
OH SHOOT
GOD DAMMIT! I hit reload and lost my huge ass comment. UGH!
Well, here is my biggest issue, mare's don't have prostates. The analogous thing would be the G-spot. The prostate is a male thing.
[qoute]Not to mention, the odd angle she was sitting at had the tail attachment pressing right into her prostate
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Every time I read through these comments, this one always gets me so hard XD laughing so hard.
6634232 it's an appropriate sentiment.
Also... wow this chapter. Once again you are taking the time to show proper after care but more than anything... let's just say i find myself inspired to try some things id not considered before.