I know it's not the point of the story, but I wouldn't mind seeing Fancy and his cronies being brought down a peg or six.

Am I the only one who thought either Luna's or Fleur's gift was going to be a collar?

Yes things are about to heat up.

godness damn it, why is it so hot ?! !!
great work Loyal !!

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nope i thought the whole time: yeah Luna might gift Fleur with a collar of some sort

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Nope. I also thought at least Luna's would be a collar. Oh well, this is just as good.

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Having read a lot of Loyal's other works, I definitely wouldn't dismiss the possibility that Fancy and his associates will get their comeuppance. I have no idea whether that will actually happen in this specific tale, but if it does, it's going to be brutal and graceful all at once. ;)

That's just how Loyal rolls.

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you mean like a gagged and bound Fleur ends with the ponies she hates the most in a closed room ... for a while till Luna comes to the 'rescue' (still gagged and bound at the end, guess you know what i mean)

edit: i hope this doesn't get to mindfuck and/or violent

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Yeah, I was definitely thinking collar(s).

It is indeed going to be a long night

More plz

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Forthcoming
Though it might be a week or two.

This, dear Loyal, might be your best chapter yet.

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I can't help but see Luna and Fleur conspiring to get them tied up at Luna's mercy, then having pictures posted in the paper.

I literally just realized the book she's reading is basically a better-written version of Fifty Shades of Grey.

3511170 Lelouch! What are you doing on this website?

“You see, to me… A dom/sub relationship is all about one thing.” She lifted her hoof up, smiling at Fleur. “Trust.”

I like the influence I see from Sunstone. I really need to catch up on that comic as well.

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I wanted it to be a collar.

You made BDSM sound romantic. In a surprisingly good way, too.

Well done

6277275 BDSM is, very romantic when done right <3 it's really nice to see a more, realistic look at it in a fic *giggles softly*

“No!” Luna seemed offended. “Not at all! Quite the opposite, in fact.” Luna leaned in, beckoning Fleur closer. “You see, to me… A dom/sub relationship is all about one thing.” She lifted her hoof up, smiling at Fleur. “Trust.”

This. Thank you for this. So many stories and books portray this fact wrong For BDSM. (There is a reason I don't read stories about it often) A proper dom/sub relationship is Very much focused around Compassion, Love and Trust. So often it's portrayed as some kind of Semi-abusive relationship where the Dom takes advantage of the sub for their own gratification often in a fashion that almost Emulates Rape or Sexual abuse, But honestly? Every Strong dom/sub Pair I know Is either married and/or has Happily been together for years.

Because of that Deep seeded bond of trust. It's just like after an intense session the most important thing is for there to be comfort and care. The trip to and from "sub-space" Whilst Obviously enjoyable, is emotionally jarring and draining and requires a level of care afterwards that... Books tend to ignore.

6806594 Indeed, in real life BDSM is often VERY romantic Because the relationship extends well beyond the Sex. After all So much Care and compassion (And trust!) goes into a healthy dom/sub relationship.

Well. I'll be damned, this is good. Except...

She dog-eared the page and set it on her nightstand

Gaaah! Nonononoooo!!!!!!! (Sorry. I was raised by librarians.)

Wait why do ponies exchange gifts on hearths warming eve instead of hearths warming proper.

*fangirl squeal* YAAAASS!!! HAVE SEX, YA PONIES!!! I'll admit it, I was drooling a bit... I need more NOW! If my battery died, I'd sob hysterically.