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Can we have something happen in this story? Like her being almost raped by Hoity Toity or something? Something to make this story have more plot?
Great job, again. Even though I'm not much into Dom/sub, this story explains both sides of the kink very well. Keep it up!
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wat
Go read something else.
3624617 Oh come on! Then you have Luna be badass and kill off Hoity!
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I think this story has plenty of 'plot' already. Ifyouknowwhatimean.
But seriously, don't doubt the planning; I'm sure Loyal has plans to rip out our hearts through our noses with some plot twist somehow.
Celestia be damned, I haven't even read the chapter and I'm squealing like a fangirl.
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^^^^^ What he said.
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And seriously. If you're looking for something like that in this story, go read something else. I have my plans, and they don't involve rape or death.
3624634 Fine, jeez. Nice story anyway.
3624622 luna may be a bad ass but in this story she is kind and caring not to be a cold hearted killer
Every chapter just gets better and better, very eager to see what comes next. Devious Luna is best Luna after all.
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very good to know
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2nd that !
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how about putting one and one together ? secret society, fleurs wishes what to do in lunas and her play time, where hoity toity went ...
not this hard to see what could happen huh ?
anyway, Loyal great work again
and you get the lenght of the chapters just right, its fun to read
i wonder if this was some kind of inspiration ? because, well, it's basicly about the same stuff
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Read the story description.
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oh lol my attention span of 5 year old huh
Period, not a semi-colon. And just what is the scale being used here? I was thinking it was going to be the size of a stallion's penis.
5932319 That's a perfectly acceptable use of a semicolon, although the following 's' shouldn't be capitalized.
Its odd... seeing Fleur's safeword... I had the exact same one xD
Technically, at that point it's irrumatio, not fellatio. Because of course the Romans had two different words for blowjobs.
Does Discord know she does this?