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“Ha ha.” Fleur deadpanned. As it is, this bit on SA seems out of place. Why tell us about SA if he never appears?
I'd say your proofreader has a point, but I agree with you not taking their advice. I would advise removing the proofreading comment from the text of the story though.
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*ahem* Didn't see that. >.>
D'aaaaww!
Commence read.
I know the dialogue continues, just looks weird.
Wrong one? Possibly Celestia instead of Luna?
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Fixed the first one, but huh? What's the issue with the second one?
So I was just re-reading Intimate Details, and the wedding vows in that story suddenly seemed very familiar. They're not identical, but wow are they similar to the vows here.
(Intimate Details: The Best Day Ever (Part 2))
I really want to know more about Cadance since she was around a millennia ago.
Cadance has lasted 1000 years pretty well.
Opening quote.
If Celestia and Twilight really do shack up, that could be a real kick in the gut for Luna.
Heh
I think it is approaching two years.
this line made me squee with delight. I am inexplicably happy that I am not the only person to have ever thought of this term.
Yeah Tia is the strict one.