673774 No problem. Happy to help.

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Hmmm... I think I shall go for the cloak, or something similar. Thank you.

673295 Umm... I would say that "Projector" isn't the best name for a visor. Now if the base design was moved from the headset to something like a system where it projected the environment of the game into the surrounding area and thus was controlled by the player, "Projector'' would be better name. However, seeing as I have spent the last 15 minutes trying to think of something better, all I could think of was "Immersive Virtual-reality Hood," "Immersive Virtual-reality Mask," "Immersive Virtual-reality Veil" or "Immersive Virtual-reality Cloak." These, to me at least, seem to fit the current technology of a visor that puts you into the video game world.

673274
Cool! The Slendermane chapter was a bit difficult to get through since I was on a writer's block at the time.

Btw, I've been meaning to introduce a new name for the I.P.V.
What do you think of "Immersive Virtual-reality Projector?"

672899 I would probably say my favorite part would be when Luna sends you and Red to the Everfree Forest to be hunted by Slendermane. It was very funny and I definitely didn't see it coming. The start was a good way to introduce it too. The way you sent Pinkie in was very funny and gave a good reason to start the story. Also seeing it from a first person view through the IPV was a good touch. It gave a nice explanation of why the game-play was in first person versus just putting it in first person or telling it from outside of the game itself. Plus I will always enjoy video games so there is that.