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Yugimotou


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When mysterious marks appear on five ponies throughout Equestria, an ancient battle between the forces of creation and destruction is revived. Can these five Prophets, unwitting servants of fate, protect the balance of their land from the forces that seek to destroy it?

If an ancient struggle can be revived, can those dear to us be as well?

Final story in the semi-ironically ill-conceived Clause Series.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 19 )

One chapter in and you've already made me feel. Nice opening chapter.

Comment posted by Yugimotou deleted Nov 4th, 2013

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Why thank you, good sir.

The name keeps changing lol.

Might go back and read the first ones first. But from my unbiased point of view, this is definately a story that DOESN'T deserve to be buried in dislikes, like it is currently. You have my like sir, keep at it.

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Very kind words, Thank you. I hope you enjoy the stories, and the coming updates.

A chapter with Green in it is never a bad one. Anyway, it was a good scene though it could use more detail.

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More detail. Got it. I will endeavor to work on that in the future.

Made an account on this bloody site just to help you out with a like and ask a question.

Where the fuck is Gold? How are gay people supposed to get into the story without that qtcolt running around with his soulmate?

Smh mate, you gotta bring him back. cant just have one sexuality covered in a clopfic.
at least in my point of view

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I'll admit it - I enjoy writing Gold's reckless stupidity, and I enjoy writing Braeburn's caring and forgiving nature.

As much as I would love to bring them back, I'm afraid I will simply have to see. If I can't weave it into the story well enough, I won't do it. But I will endeavor to take your request into consideration, and hopefully get back to you with something you enjoy.

Thanks for the comment!

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Solid work mate, Ill be looking forward to it

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>mfw i come back and there are even more dislikes and no update

Oh well, this story wouldn't be as cool if it were mainstream.

almost a month since the last update, i expect a damn long chapter soon.

Sorry for the delay in getting the new chapter out - I just deleted half of it due to poor planning.

The next chapter may be out before Christmas, I'll try.

Good writing, but making Shining Armor a sort of closet bi is a little too much of a shake-up. Hell, he and Cadence threw out the changelings with a love powered blast.

Whether or not it'll actually happen is something you'll have to read to learn. There are plenty of stallions out there, after all.

So, Cadence is on her period, and Gold has a hidden power. I wonder who this draconic savior is.

So they must find the other 3 people to form exodia?

Hmm, the spirits from the marks are reminding me of Stands from JoJo's Bizarre adventure. I'm guessing that's where you got the idea.

The idea was inspired by a mixture of different sources.

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