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A Compilation of stories that attempt to explain some of the oddities of Equestria.
The story itself is a book, while each chapter is one explanation of the world's history.
Several of the chapters within the book contradict each other, so how much if it is true is a mystery.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

I think that this has a lot of potential, though I see it more as something like a storybook, and the writing style so far definitely gives it that feeling.

I think that I'm going to follow this and see where it goes.

Urgh... not feeling too keen on my newest chapter...:unsuresweetie:
It's just.... Styled differently than the last 2.
Not sure if it still fits in. Ah well. Here's hoping for the best. :pinkiesad2:

This actually the better of the three chapters you`ve written. However like your other two, it could use alot more to it, this one being a much more fufilled one. The read remined me of a history video for music when I was either in 5 grade or watching Fantasia 2000, and is an interesting concept...:twistnerd:

You done goofed my friend, there was sappose to be only 5 orbs, not 6 of them!:facehoof:
You can try to argue about seeing 6 orbs in the second episode, but we all know that was a animator goof up.
As for the rest of the story, I feel there could be more to it, so keep at it!:twilightsmile:

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