Northern Downpour is a stallion who knows of something far beyond the ideas of others. He knows of a mare in the sky. She has the world. She has the stars. She doesn't have him.
Incase you couldn't tell, this is inspired by Panic! At The Disco's "Pretty. Odd." album.
IS OF GOOD STORY
GOOD LIKE VODKA
YOU ARE MASTER WORDSMITH
This story kind of hurt my eyes.
Yeah, grammar and such is okay, but you need to place a couple paragraphs to NOT make it a big chunk of wall text. You also didn't need 3 chapters less than 1000 words each. This story is kind of meh...