I Had The World

by Inspiration

Becoming Mad As Rabits

"You just had to do it, didn't you?"

I had lost my one and only love. And the "Elements of Harmony" were to blame.

"She was the greatest thing I could ever imagine, and you drover her away from me! What were you all THINKING!?"

All I received was blank stares. They were almost asking why I was angry. I had a right to be. But eventually, I got a softly spoken answer.

"...we're sorry...we didn't..."

"Look, if you think you were going to help something, I can start to regret yelling. But, damnit, Pinkie, sometimes 'sorry' isn't enough." They should understand why I was furious. After minutes, I finally left the Everfree, hoping that I would run into Pas De Cheval on the way home. I never saw her. I did, however, run into a meek butterball, so to speak.

"What do you want, Fluttershy?" I never meant to say it with as much force as I did...

As soon as I saw her eyes begin to water, I immediately regretted saying anything.

"Fluttershy, I'm so, so sorry about that...it's just...I'm just upset about Pas...can you forgive me?"

Comments

[trymenow]

IS OF GOOD STORY
GOOD LIKE VODKA
YOU ARE MASTER WORDSMITH

[airin6ixxx]

This story kind of hurt my eyes.
Yeah, grammar and such is okay, but you need to place a couple paragraphs to NOT make it a big chunk of wall text. You also didn't need 3 chapters less than 1000 words each. This story is kind of meh...