Babs is working as a defense attorney, but lately she's been feeling melancholy.
This was written for a fanfic contest. The stipulations were that it had to be between 100 and 2,000 words in length, and the topic was "apples". This is what I came up with.
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Um...
Uh...
This story is really awkward
It's ok but...you need paragraphs. Walls of text are not your friend.
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I added some spacing between the paragraphs, hopefully it's a bit easier to read now.
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Why do you say that?
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Well, it's a wall of text, and you got Babs out of character.
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I didn't realize that it would look like that when I copied it in from Word. My file in Microsoft Word has spacing in between the paragraphs. I edited it just now to add spaces in between the paragraphs.
And I don't think that I got Babs out of character. This story is set a few years after the events of "One Bad Apple" and "Apple Family Reunion", so Babs will have grown up and gotten more mature. At the same time, everyone has their off days, periods of time when they just can't quite feel happy.
Thank you for your opinion, though.