• Member Since 29th Sep, 2013
  • offline last seen Dec 25th, 2013

Flutterkill123


I'm amazing.

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Cast the shadows out from sight
A final stand a shouting cry
All the wrongs now turned to right
So fight the past
Take back the night
And call upon the torch tonight
To bring out all the ghosts to light
Because at last we have to go it's time
To take back the night

"My name, is Twilight Sparkle. I am the newest of the princesses. After my achivement in-... How you say... The "Human" World, I had been given my own universe to rule on my own. But... Soon... It all backfired..."

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 20 )

:rainbowlaugh:
When I first saw it on the front page

Awesome story, like the concept:rainbowdetermined2:. I was thinking that if you don't have an specific plans, then how about her showing up in front of the King's Son after he slays herobrine. Coming back to the village together, and finding that the enderdragon and the wither have teamed up and destroyed the village, another take back the night situation, don't you think:pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:. If not that idea, then try making it so Luna has the ip to the minecraft universe server, and logs on, only Twilight doesn't know about Luna joining.:trixieshiftright::ajsmug:

By the way, I can totally see Twilight saying those things about minecraft good work.:rainbowdetermined2:

3297141 Thank you! I will be using that :pinkiehappy:

Hmm...
No ideas from me, but keep it up! (Maybe not PonyDragonSword's idea; I would rather see her build her way up from the ground, until the Ender Dragon shows up and starts to wreck the landscape, so Twilight has to defeat him. But that's just me!)

The song was good, and the video even better. Because of those facts, I will be following the story.

How about Twilight ends up becoming ruler of the kingdom from Fallen Kingdom (the prequel, of sorts, of Take Back the Night)? Then, when the kingdom ends up falling, she and the kid end up going through the events of TBtN.

Side note: your grammar could use a bit of work. Not too bad, but there were mistakes here and there.

3298472 I don't know where the mistakes are. I spell checked the story 4 times. But, for everyone, expect the next chapter sometime next weekend!

ive always wondered what happened to the king, so maybe adding him in would be something.

OH SWEET LUNAR GODDESS, BY THE LIGHT OF YOUR GENTLE MOON, IT'S HAPPENED!!!:pinkiegasp: IT'S FINALLY HAPPENED!!!! IT'S AMAZING!!!!:raritydespair::raritycry:

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I'm so nervcited that you like it! I'm just a little nervous about the next chapter... It should be up sometime around tomorrow or this weekend! :pinkiehappy:

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH i love that song, so much, I havent even read the story, I just want to commend you on being an awesome person before I read it!
:pinkiehappy:

this has started out an excellent story, and i find it hard to believe that people wouldnt like this.

3457707 im wondering how it could backfire. the castle struck an interest in my mind, and im waiting to see when it comes into play.

3457778 Maybe within a few more weeks... Still more family bullshit :/

3458115 Just some bullshit. Don't worry! I'll be writing a few more stories soon enough. IF i can get my lazy ass up and do something XD

3473484 Must be a LOT of laziness weighing you down...

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