• Member Since 29th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Mar 5th, 2012

MarvelousPegasus


I AM A REGULAR MAGICAL PEGASUS!!!! I AM SIMPLY MARVELOUS!!! Some say my name actually is CorporalPegasus.

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Pyle is a very cool popular guy, he has over 900000 friends on Facebook. But the nasties hate him and kill his familly. Trough his magical Nintendo 3DS (Game and system sold sepratly) he goes to Equestria and meet Super hawt knalta.

If you still dont get it, it sucks on purpose.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 7 )

It's an alright troll fic, but it's almost as if you're trying way too hard. You need less ramblings and more idiotic plots. You also need to put more exclamation points and grammatical errors. All in all, this has the potentialif being truly horrible. 6 Crazy Pinkie's out of 10
:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

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Thanks, ill try less hard, use worse grammer, and make the plot really messed up on the next chapter. :rainbowlaugh:

Needs more barking necks.

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No, actually, gotta see someone kill onies with bear hands.

I actually find this very entertaining. I shouldn't. Well done I guess.

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