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Discords Day Out

What happens when Discord inhabits a royal guards body for 24 hours?

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Chapters (4)

The setup · 25th Sep 2013 · 1,382 words
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Daddy Discord · 27th Sep 2013 · 1,639 words
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Lets get it started · 16th Oct 2013 · 2,254 words
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Lets get this over with · 16th Oct 2013 · 1,152 words
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Xzaves

Xzaves #1 · Sep 26th, 2013 · · · The setup ·

Paragraphs were a little big but since the chapter wasn't too long, it didn't get too bad.
I like the concept and look forward to what you'll write later on

Serperior2

Serperior2 #2 · Sep 26th, 2013 · · · The setup ·

3259611thanjs for the comment, this is my first fan fiction I've ever written so it may need some spit and polish. I always appreciate constructive criticism and feedback

Clocklike

Clocklike #3 · Nov 6th, 2013 · · · Lets get it started ·

Twilightsparkle should be written Twilight Sparkle,
and Rainbowdash should be Rainbow Dash.
Also try skipping lines more often, so that it doesn't look like a wall of text.
Few mistakes for a first story, so good job.

Comment posted by Serperior2 deleted Nov 7th, 2013

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