• Member Since 17th Sep, 2013
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Flutter_Girl


Another brony, here to make story's and read them

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Pinkie Pie, Apple Jack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity all stand quietly after Twilight left Earth through the portal on her way home. Now that Twilight is gone, the others have felt lonley without her. Nothing is the same. Sunset Shimmer is long gone now, also in Equestria. Months pass and the feeling without Twilight, is not something they want to happen. After a few months the girls try to make it into Equestria, find Twilight, and make it back with her. Will they bring Twilight back where she belongs? If you read Making It Back Home, you may see

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

And no one gave a crap about Spike, hm? :raritycry:

3245278 I love spike, don't get me wrong, but I didn't feel a need for him in this chapter. He will be in future chapters though

3244868 sorry, still first story, so will not be as good as someone who has done many stories. I did feel as this was a bit choppy, and If I get more comments saying to change it I might go back and edit it a bit. Thank you for the feedback though

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