• Published 22nd Sep 2013
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The Cutie Mark Crisis - Jingle



All of the Cutie Mark Crusaders get there cutie marks, all but Scootaloo. The other Cutie Mark Crusaders are too caught up with their new talents to notice that Scootaloo doesn't have hers. Scootaloo is devastated.

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Hospitality and Hospitals

"I welcome you all to the first meeting of the Cutie Marked!" Sweetie Belle said ecstatically.

"Now that role call is done lets discuss our first topic, helping each other show off our amazing talents," Babs Seed said.

"I have a good idea for you to show off your talent Apple Bloom!" Sweetie Belle exclaimed.

"What's that?" Apple Bloom asked.

"Well, I was thinking that we could set up a stand in the Ponyville market place and you could sell all your apple treats there," Sweetie Belle said.

"That's a great idea!" Apple Bloom exclaimed.

"I have and idea for Sweetie Belle," Babs Seed announced.

"What are you waiting for? Lets hear it!" Sweetie Belle exclaimed.

"We could put on a concert at school," Babs said.

"No! I hate singing in front of ponies," Sweetie Belle said nervously.

"Come on Sweetie Belle, it's your special talent, you'll do great!" Apple Bloom said, trying to cheer Sweetie Belle up.

"You make a good point," Sweetie Belle said, still pondering the idea.

"Come on," Babs pleaded.

"Hmm, alright," Sweetie Belle agreed with a sheepish smile.

"Yes!" Apple Bloom exclaimed.

The three ponies went on, sharing ideas and laughing. They were about to be put to the ultimate test of hospitality and kinds, though they didn't know it yet. There was a small knock on the door.

"Come in," Sweetie Belle said.

When the Cutie Marked club saw who walked in the foot they went silent.

"Sliver Spoon!" Apple Bloom exclaimed.

Silver Spoon nodded shyly. She was afraid the three ponies wouldn't be very welcoming after how she and Diamond Tiara had treated them.

"Hey, if you came back here to make fun of my friends..." Babs threatened.

"No, no, it's not like that," Silver Spoon said.

"Then why are you here?" Apple Bloom asked.

"Diamond Tiara kicked me out of the group," Silver Spoon said sadly.

"What do you want us to do about it?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"Maybe we could... Be friends?" Silver Spoon said, a questioning tone creeping into her voice.

"Why should we be friends with you?" Babs asked.

"Because Diamond Tiara made me act so mean to you, I always felt guilty about it," Silver Spoon pleaded.

"We forgive you," Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle said in unison.

"You do? Thank you so much!" Silver Spoon exclaimed.

"Well, I don't, good thing I'm going back to Manehatten in two weeks," Babs said coldly.

Silver Spoon gave a sad and pleading look to Babs.

"I guess we can be friends for now," Babs said softly.

"Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" Silver Spoon exclaimed.

* * *

"I have your results!" Rainbow Dash announced. "Uhh, Scoot, are you ok?"

Scootaloo laid sprawled out on the ground, panting heavily and shaking.

"Uhh, Scootaloo?" Rainbow Dash asked.

The little pegasus filly did not respond.

'Twilight will know what's wrong!' Rainbow Dash thought.

"Be back in a dash," Rainbow Dash muttered to Scootaloo as she flew off to Twilights house. When she got there all Rainbow Dash managed to say between pants was, "Scootaloo... Something wrong... At the park... Hurry."

Rainbow Dash flew off and Twilight captured her in an aura of purple magic, teleporting both of them to the park. The two friends found Scootaloo in the same state Rainbow Dash had left her.

"Twilight, what's wrong with her?" Rainbow Dash asked, in a panic.

"I don't know, you better just take her to the hospital," Twilight said calmly.

"Ok," Rainbow Dash said quickly, and with that she had the pegasus filly in her arms and was flying off towards the hospital.

Comments ( 16 )

Lol, thanks for the feedback

Are they going to lose their best friend and regret ignoring their former cutie mark crusader and possibly scoots gets her mark in survival in the life or death situation?:scootangel::applecry::unsuresweetie:

Maybe, maybe not! lol

Whoa that escalated quickly :applejackconfused:

I am writing the last chapter, sorry it's been so long.

3596411 Can you hurry up please?

Really sorry for the delay, the next chapter should be up before too long, I had a lot of editing to do.

WTF WHY THE HELL DID YOU CANSLE IT :twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2: I WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER WITH SCOOTALOO BEING IN THE HOSPITAL

4566952
Sorry, I have become a much better writer since writing this story and I lost interest. I felt no need to continue it.

But dude alot of people liked this story I loved it so much and if youccansle it a lot of people will get pissed at you like you finding your favorite story cansled your gonna get pissed off the the athuor

4574716
I'm very sorry, I just lost interest in this story. I will consider rewriting it at some point, but I currently don't have the time or drive to do so.

4577459 oh ok......
wait ok what about this PINKIE PROMISE THAT you will come back and rewrite this story
and also tell me throught a PM that you are restarting the story

4577557
I Pinkie Promise that I will rewrite this story. Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.

Just give me some time. I was already asked to write another story and I have several I am already working on.

5100386 I wrote this story quite a long time ago, and I have to say I'm actually rather embarrassed to say I wrote it. I know now that there were countless errors in this story, but thanks for the comment.

5105931
When will the remake be out?

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