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Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?
3774603 Will twy to make it intewestingererererrerer….er
3835733 It is coming indeed he he.
Alright, I noticed a few spelling errors in the first few paragraphs and punctuation could use some work, you did great with the dialogue, and over all not a bad chapter. Can't wait for the next one
until next time I'm happynoname56 signing off from another great chapter
3836520 And i profusely apologise for them all…I've decided to forgo the tedious grammar rechecking because it inhibits my speed and capacity. as long as the readers enjoy it, thats what counts!
I am still very happy you enjoyed despot the maimed grammar and what not. hope you are there to make sure it remains enjoyable! ha ha