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Will do

I heard a story of a Marine that fought kind of like that during Vietnam, in the way he was wounded and got the kill.
Anyway... great chapter keep up the good work.

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Crazy Marine! Glad the chapter did not dissappoint. On the next ha ha.

its probably just me but the fight scene was hard to follow not knowing who did what but ill figure it out .... eventually

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No I think your right, I need to have some more focus on footing. I was trying to covey Applejack's inability to follow the fight because of her shock. I need to figure out how to make that better. Appreciate the input.