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Gypsy Writefag
I mainly write smut and some occasional PG-13 stuff.
Gypsy Writefag
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This, is a very good clopfic. I've always wanted someone to write from this situation, and while it may be out there, this is rather good. Any possibility of F/F?
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Thank you!
Yes, F/F is a definite possibility, and I will more than likely write chapters featuring F/F. In fact, the next character I had planned for lewd adventures with, is female.
This started out so well, then quickly became an exercise in mysogyny, even by clop standards. The real Big Mac would surely disapprove.
"Being used like the slut you are, ... is far more important than your lack of oxygen."
This is where things get really fucked up. I've been with a guy like that, once, and it was hell. Nopony likes being choked on a cock, dude. Choking is scary, not sexy.
"F-FUCK ME! USE ME! I'M W-WORTHLESS!"
Yeah, this is where I stopped reading. This is even more fucked up than what I normally read here. I'm done. Eat shit, douche-bag.
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Well that narrows it down to 2/3 of the population of Equestria :P Just try to include a bit more plot (actual plot) and it'll be even better :)
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It will have more plot (of the story kind), don't worry. This was just a one-shot for a particular thread, which turned out to have a lot of potential.
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Lube and toblerone.
No.
Just no.
It HAD potential, but you killed it with the choking and repeatedly violated the corpe from then on.
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I assume you mean 'corpse'. I'd just like to point out that there are no corpses in my story, unless you count the initial "death" of the main character.
3212637 I meant the corpse of the potential this fic had.
Also, my 'S' key is a fickle bitch, so don't be surprised if I occasionally miss one in my words.
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Different strokes for different folks.
circle of pony life (slowly yet loudly claps hands) its a beautiful thing
This started off dirty and just went downhill from there. Outstanding. Shame you killed it.
4536462 *pfffffffffffft*
4552214 *readies sorry stick*
4552465 no, man!I thought it was funny! not embarrassing!
No I swear mista! I di'n't mean no hahm'!
(My attempt at dilogue....)
You suddenly realize that when you write in second person if you have the main character with preconceived notions, it sure as heck better be what the readers believe to be true.
You then resolve to write your greentext as actions without explaining why the main character is acting that way, or declaring what they believe, unless it's baldly obvious.
Then you think it's a good idea for ferrets to have money. So you give me all your money because you admire my incredible wit and sexy body, and every time you look at me it makes your heart go pitter-pat.