A Special Day

Strikerbolt

Strikerbolt #1 · Oct 11th, 2013 · 2 · 5 ·

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I saw one view and thought 'might as well check it out. I gave up at pseudo retarded mail mare.

Gypsy Writefag

Gypsy Writefag #2 · Oct 11th, 2013 · · ·

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3329868
Pretty offensive stuff, I know.

Flames173

Flames173 #3 · Oct 11th, 2013 · 1 · ·

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Maybe all of the cakes are made with the intestines of ponies.

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TalltalePony

TalltalePony #4 · Oct 11th, 2013 · 5 · ·

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Woah! Holy crap, this is hot!

Like and favorite, though I must complain that I have been grossly misrepresented here. There is no way, by all that bathes in Celestia's sun, that I would ever hesitate to fuck Pinkie Pie. The very thought, sir, is offensive.

Good day! (And good fic!)

Gypsy Writefag

Gypsy Writefag #5 · Oct 11th, 2013 · 1 · ·

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3330061
I apologize, for I have failed you. Please forgive my sins and have mercy on my soul.

Strikerbolt

Strikerbolt #6 · Oct 11th, 2013 · · ·

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3329898 Yeah, at least I can say second viewer! Sadly, I skipped everything after that point. Sorry.

Darallex

Darallex #7 · Oct 12th, 2013 · · ·

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3330061>>3330061I second this motion.

ShadowNinja27

ShadowNinja27 #8 · Oct 13th, 2013 · · ·

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Very hot story here and given if I was in the same position as anon I wouldn't or more like couldn't wait to rut Pinkie Pie even if I didn't have the strength to do so cause that's what autopilot is for! Lol.

Procket12

Procket12 #9 · Oct 24th, 2013 · 5 · ·

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The narrator needs rest.....The spirit is willing, but the flesh is spongy and bruised.

Gypsy Writefag

Gypsy Writefag #10 · Oct 24th, 2013 · 3 · ·

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3392911
Too much information.

Aura Zero

Aura Zero #11 · Jun 12th, 2014 · · ·

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THis story was rather good! I liked the read very much.

Shower, breakfast, greeting that pseudo-retarded mailmare.

I would never say that even on a bad day. If anything, Seeing her would actually make my day better.

She wiggles her rump to the best of her ability, all the while waggling her eyebrows at you. Despite your mind telling you to simply untie her and back off, you can't help but draw closer to her. Closer and closer to the heat radiating from her pulsing, dripping vagina.
“Look”, you start. “We probably shouldn't-”

I'm sorry but there is no way in Tartarus I would even think of hesitating if the offer of rutting Pinkie consensually ever presented itself. Out of all the mares in Equestria (even tho she isn't my favorite) Pinkie is the sole one i wouldn't hesitate to go deep, seep, and keep... and Luna. That goddess of the night can have it any night.

whatmustido

whatmustido #12 · Jun 12th, 2014 · · ·

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Your grammar on the dialogue is wrong.

“Look”, you start. “We probably shouldn't-”

should be

“Look,” you start. “We probably shouldn't—”

Commas go inside.

panzerbrony

panzerbrony #13 · Jun 14th, 2014 · · ·

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very good read my friend you didn't start us n id clop and gave us some fun.
I wonder how many rounds does it take to satisfy pinkie in heat?

Alticron

Alticron #14 · Jun 15th, 2014 · · ·

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I found some things you may want to edit.

Life really turned out to not be that much different her in Equestria.

That should be "here". Also, you consistently referred to Mrs. Cake as Ms. Cake.

Crystal Cuddles

Crystal Cuddles #15 · Jun 17th, 2014 · · ·

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I would never call Derpy a 'pseudo-retarded mailmare' I would go and hug her she's my favorite pegasus.

And come on, I would never hesitate to rut Pinkie Pie (shes my 2nd favourite earth pony xD)

metroid_freak

metroid_freak #16 · Dec 31st, 2014 · 1 · ·

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BATCAN