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Tuume


I'm just a dude who somehow got caught up in the majesty that is MLP: FiM. I like quality fics and I'm looking to improve to produce some.

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Though never touched upon often, the art of magic, whether used by unicorns, pegasi, or earth ponies can have darker applications. The simplest of spells could spell disaster if utilized in the (in)correct way. Unfortunately for a quaint town, The Great and Powerful Trixie has chosen to explore those applications.

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This was a Halloween special I put up months ago on FF.net, just a show of spirit. Don't pull any punches, people. Tell me how I did, what I need to improve, all that jazz.:trixieshiftright:

A nice short, not particularly scary, but definitely had a bit of a creepy vibe to it. Especially with the revelation that Trixie plans to make this some sort of sick cycle of Death and Power for herself.

267467 Thanks for the comment. Creepy is better than nothing and I'm glad I was able to get that feel across.

274580 It was well written anyway. If it had been longer and along the same vibe, it may have been scarier.

Keep writing, you have some talent.

I hope you don't mind but I did a reading of your story.

8096018 I don't mind at all! It was a wonderful reading. Thank you for taking the time out to do this for an old story of mine.

The commotion reaching a fevered pitch, Trixie, with terrible, haunting power, commanded, "Give yourselves to me!"

Dang shes cold

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