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I'm a youtuber who makes let's plays and stuff. I put a lot of thought in my stories and tend to over think them, planning things that don't even happen until like 5 chapters later. Bear with me :P


Trixie returns to Ponyville a year after she was defeated by Twilight for a second time. She expects to find the place how she remembered it, but instead finds something horrifying. A terrible darkness has swept over Ponyville, a darkness that reaches all the way to Canterlot. Trixie finds that all the ponies she used to know are now corrupted by sin. The mane six and Princess Celestia had become the seven deadly sins. Trixie must now find a way to save Equestria and bring the ponies back to the light. She'll find aid in the most unlikely of friends in this dark journey.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

Hmm... I think it has promise, tighten it up the piece a bit and it should be fine.

3184005 Thanks. I edited the first chapter a bit more earlier today to make it sound a little better. Hopefully I won't make as many mistakes in the next chapter

I was thinking Celestia was the element of Lust... :trollestia::twilightoops::facehoof:

I love this story so far but it could stand to slow down a little

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