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Brodemus


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This is.. just.. so sad.. :( ;-; why did I read this? I hate sad things. :c

This is one of the most saddest and happiest thing I have ever read. Brilliant. Simply brilliant.

This is really, really good.

#4 · Oct 12th, 2011 · · ·

rainbow should have had a better death than that it practicly killed the story for me...

I'm sorry, but I just have to vent my frustration at the way Rainbow is almost always the one to die in these fics. I admit I'm biased because she's my favorite character, but it's still getting really old really fast. I have yet to read a fic about her where she ends up being really prosperous or living the dream in the end, its always either she dies (or gets some irreversible injury or trauma) or everything just goes back to normal, where her life is no better (or worse) than it always is. Why can't someone make a Dash fic where she ends up being better off in the end than she had been in the beginning, like maybe one where in the end she actually joins the Wonderbolts?
Again, I'm sorry for being so blunt and I still think this is a cute story, but a guy can only take so many stories about the death of their favorite character before they crack.

#6 · Oct 14th, 2011 · · ·

:applecry: this is just so sad... I don't know why, but reading this put the song fix you by coldplay in my head... It is a beautiful story by the way, it just seems so sad... *sniff* :fluttercry:

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stop killing Rainbow.

#9 · Nov 27th, 2011 · · ·

Sad from start to end

Well.... I'm not going to lie... I ended up shedding manly tears because when Scootaloo aged & always went back to Rainbow Dash's grave, which I thought was sweet & sad too :raritycry::raritydespair: But, I know that Rainbow Dash is probably up there thinking that Scootaloo did what she wanted to do and believed in her RIP Rainbow Dash...

Ok. There is something wrong with the quality of writers when they EMPHASIZE a homonym of what they're trying to use! ("Idle" should be "idol".)

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Thanks for catching that one, man. I can't believe I missed one as obvious as that. :derpyderp1:

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It was only a matter of time.

You just made a 22 Year old Pararescueman cry.
And I couldn't be anymore happier/
Great Story, I truly hope to see more in the future.
This story actually reminds me of my own life in some ways.
Thank You for posting this.
-Ghost

You just got told by the Master chief! OooOOOOooooOOO!

the sadness, the writing, just great!! no words for how wonderful!

you almost made me go:applecry:

MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!
This is the noise I make when I'm broken.
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!!

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