Damn! Not bad for your first time.

Good show, old boy.

I am quite pleased.

I loved it

This need to be continued. Do you have any idea how rare a shining/cadance/chrysalis pairing is?! I only know of one beside this one!

Pretty good.story. I'd like to see it continued.

Neat.

I'm betting those contacts let him see changelings. Good story.

Not bad at all, really.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Brilliant! Really needs another chapter, though.

Obvious continuation idea is obvious.
Shining admits to his wife that he really liked the present and ask if she could do it again next anniversary, and as it would terns out, the unstolen love was so much more powerful then Christelis had expected, that it would be enough to last until the next aniversary. This inevitably leads to stronger relation between the two kingdoms . . .so long as Cadence and Christelis can keep the secret.
But people then begin to question why the two kingdoms have suddenly become so close and then some bad guy or girl threatens to let the cat out of the beg and the two are forced to confess the whole thing to Shining. Then Shining, Cadence and Christilist all team up to kill the bad guy.

fucking......awesome, NOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT MORNING!???

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Oh how wrong you are. If my other stories are any indication. I'm not a nice person to my Characters.

The only thing you have correct is that one part of it. You didn't think I was actually going to tell you right?

besides, only if I get enough support will I be inclined to continue this fic how it was planned out in my head

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MOAR!!!

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRR!

This needs to be a full blown romance fic!

NOW! STAT! CHOP CHOP! DO IT!

Multi-Parter! This demands more Threesome action! Make Chrysalis fall for Shining Armor! And Cadence Finally admit, it's fun to have another mare in bed with her husband, threesome!

This story begs for a continuation

3183171 Most plausible idea first then.Cristalis uses the magic covering spell or whatever to hide her true form from X important male figure or x important futa character XD. But that is all I can assume from some of the stuff you did foreshadow.

But if you are not nice to your characters, I can only assume that chrysalis will somehow end up killed or something . . .

Or maybe she gets ridiculously powerful from all that love and well you know what they say about great power . . .

The third idea which is a bit of a mix of the two. Chrysalis uses her newfound power to brainwash BOTH of them and so then can continue to feed off from them until she starts to miss the way it was when the love was true. so she ends up slowly going mad until she kills herself.

Also an idea for a plot Twist: Who we thought was Cadance was really Chrysalis and vise versa. See she actually DID fail to convince the queen to go along with her plan. But instead she was brainwashed to think she was Chrysalis. makes sense right?

I know what you are thinking, and the answer is yes, I am completely insane.

A Shiny x Cady x Chrysy willing fic? I see only one chapter.

I am outraged at this.

This... Is the best Shining/Cadence/Chrysalis I've seen yet. I'd love to see more of it.

this is by far the best cadence clopfic ive ever read, good joj

In 4 moar pls.

Is it just me or does Cadence look like Princess Bubblegum in that photo?

EDIT: Need Ch.2.

Well that was just bloody fantastic! I'd read the f out of more of this stuff just to see the shenanigans that ensue! Or the drama. But I'd certainly like to see a happy ending onto this, were it to continue.

This story has sent shivers down my spine (due to awesomeness that is).

I shall now try to make a poem about this!

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Indeed

I would like to say,
That this story was good.
I read it today,
To improve my mood.

My mood it flew,
Indeed it did.
This made by you,
My urges it rid.

I thank thee,
For writing this chapter.
It made me happy,
As well as the other.

I could make a song,
But that would be boring.
It's respect it belongs,
To this story so intriguing.

I congratulate you,
For getting inside a box.
My happiness true,
As Chrysalis' locks.

I will have to go,
Much reading awaits.
Just go with the flow,
And don't grab the bait.

Good day to you good writer.

I liked this alot

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I know what you are thinking, and the answer is yes, I am completely insane

And yes, you are completely wrong on all accounts.

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oh stop it you.

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Please sir, I want some more.

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I cannot stop,
Stop what?
I have clopped,
On my bed I sat.

I respectfully and wholeheartedly request.

More.

Thank you.

Please sir can we get some more from this parring? please?????????????

Good work, though I already knew that before hand
Still, good job, it was a pleasure to proofread this for you

mind blown can't think.

This story really needs some form of a continuation. There are many possibilities to go with this story after all. Great job all around though!

Congratulations on hitting the top of the feature box!

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My thoughts exactly.

With a Queen and a Princess what could possibly go wrong?
what could possibly go wrong?
you had to say that didn't you

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Oh my god, that was amazing!
How about a sequel/chapter 2, please please please please please

'Grats! Keep it up! (that's what she said)

3184307 lies

MOAR MUTHAFUCKA MOAR MUTHAFUCKA
MOAR!

In the next part, he should find out who the "clone" really is. I think he should be angry he was tricked, but understand why he had to be.

Awesome take on queen Chrysalis, I really enjoyed it.

you need to make a chapter 2

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Imagine your need for more as a duel. Then watch this.

But don't start hating me if you don't like what comes next morning.

Image source: http://ss2sonic.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Cadence-and-Chrysalis-323438987