Cadance expects a nice night on the town. Chrysalis expects a feast of love. They both get what they want, but in a way neither of them expect. The only question is how long can they keep it a secret?
I can see Twilight sputtering about what's going on just before Cadence's shirt lands on her head as she's halfway across the room already. "Make room for Cady! I'm getting in on this!"
And another change. I definitely like this better, shows that their relationship is improving slightly from "I'm going to kill you" to "I'm going to beat the shit out of you." Baby steps.
Highly unrealistic, but funny in a comic strip panel sort of way, heh. In the story however, I suspect the blood and some visible bruising might indicate the rumble... along with some broken furniture.
Still, it's good that Shining and Chrysalis are, er, creatively expressing their disagreements with one another. Getting that out in the open is the start to a healthy relationship... right?
Can't wait to see how they try to explain their way out of this one. Also wondering what Twilight's doing here.
I can see Twilight sputtering about what's going on just before Cadence's shirt lands on her head as she's halfway across the room already. "Make room for Cady! I'm getting in on this!"
Poor Twlight is going to need some brain bleech.
That, that is what makes this a great story.
7694495 What has been seen can never be unseen.
Thanks for preventing the angry sex girls. Now they'll just stay regular angry. That's no fun.
Yeah, I get the feeling that if they weren't interrupted, Shining and Chrysalis were about to break down into angry sex.
"Too bad, because I liked what it looked like."
Dammit, SO close to hot angry sexings.
And then Twilight is scarred for life as Cadance decides to join in.
And another change. I definitely like this better, shows that their relationship is improving slightly from "I'm going to kill you" to "I'm going to beat the shit out of you." Baby steps.
7694444 Oh, that would be hilarious!
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Highly unrealistic, but funny in a comic strip panel sort of way, heh. In the story however, I suspect the blood and some visible bruising might indicate the rumble... along with some broken furniture.
Still, it's good that Shining and Chrysalis are, er, creatively expressing their disagreements with one another. Getting that out in the open is the start to a healthy relationship... right?
One paragraph later:
Seems you forgot to completely get rid of the old scene. :P
7695385 how did I not see that? I'll have to fix it later though
That ending was great.:D
YEAH. Everybody says that.
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Great stuff man!