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fullmoonbeast


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Octavia has been murdered and Vinyl has been taken to jail on suspicion of the murder.
Detective Trace is on his way to uncover the truth .
As the days crawl by ,Vinyl is in danger of facing jail or banishment for the crime she did not commit
Can detective Trace uncover the truth in time?

My first fanfic so I welcome criticism.
And I also apologize for any grammatical errors there will be in this story

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 6 )

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i finally did it , i finished another chapter.. read it and enjoy ( or not ):twilightsmile:

Fantastic concept, very well put together! It's a very original idea and i really enjoyed reading it. Great job, you're onto something here!

Sweet Jesus, the grammar in this story is absolutely terrible.

I also apologize for any grammatical errors there will be in this story

You know what's better than apologizing for errors? Fixing them.

The idea for the story seems really great, but it's just so hard to see through all this bad writing... You should really get an editor. It'll make your stories so much better.

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