Ditzy and the Doctor return to Ponyville after what to them feels like about a day, but to the Doctor's surprise, Ditzy has been labeled a missing pony, and he was her ponynapper. The Doctor meets with an old friend, they, along with Ditzy, use Nightmare Night as a guise to cloak themselves in costumes. They find what they're looking for...but that's not necessarily good. And how will Ditzy's two daughters, Amethyst and Dinky, react to their mother's sudden reappearance after such a long time?
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I love how smoothly the dialogue flows, so many of these crossover stories are really choppy but I feel like some of the lines from this could've been in the actual show. Also, the cover art is EPIC
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This has had good reception and may or may not get an audio version...with a special guest VA...
Nice story, although the dropping of number three in there did seem a little unnecessary- they could easily have realised the situation through the mayor's speech or perhaps a poster or newspaper. That said, I'd love to see how you'd do a series from this!
3078727 The inclusion of the Third may not have been necessary, but I just got the idea and went with it. and since when is every individual word in a story 100% necessary?
you got to turn this into a series!!!!!!
3319201 I plan on that plus an audio version with special guest (name withheld for surprise purposes).
3329749 eee! i can't wait!!!
For those who were interested, the Radio Play/Audio Book version is in the final stages of editing.
3333285 The Audio version is done btw.