Chapter1: Last night?
written by RainbowJack
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Amazing and simple clopfic 9/10
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I really enjoyed your story, but in my opinion saying "I love you" in the first chapter after spending one night together already is too quick. Besides that, the only thing that disturbs me a bit are the spelling and grammar mistakes, but all in all they are not so bad and everything is still fully understandable.
delicious work