• Member Since 16th Jul, 2013
  • offline last seen Jan 15th, 2014

heavymetalqueen


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Fluttershy is the shiest girl at Equestria High school, Discord is the schools residential super senior. She's his best friend, the one he couldn't live without. He is the friend her family disapproves of. Not that he really cares, but she does, so he'll at least try to be nice to them, and her friends. She'll try to keep her brother from killing her oddest friend, and listen as he complains about their principal. They both have to try to survive a year in high school.

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Comments ( 12 )

A lot of your sentences are run ons, and also you seem to like putting the period where the comma should go. I suggest an editor.

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Thank you for the advice. I will go over it again soon.

2888364 Not a problem, it's what I'm here for.

I humbly offer my editorial assistance, and congratulate you on getting me hooked on you're stories.

MOAR!:flutterrage: i mean... if that's ok with you:fluttershyouch:

Please, continue this story!

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That would be very much appreciated. I'm going to be going over it in a second and after I'm done if you would be so kind as to go over it again that would be very much appreciated.

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I will in time, sorry that I don't update during this time of year. Work ends up killing any happiness I have, sorry.

3778103 No problem, just Pm me once you want me to look it over. If you don't mind that is?

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