When Twilight Sparkle is proposed to by the love of her life, Prince Blueblood, she happily accepts and sends invitations for the Royal Wedding to all of her old friends in Ponyville. Rainbow Dash, however, still has feelings for her old marefriend, and is determined to put a stop to the wedding and re-kindle the alicorn's old feelings for her.
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Pretty good so far, though I'm sort of rooting for Blueblood. Bluelight is my favorite nonsensical ship
well this looks good.i will be waching it.
I'm really enjoying this so far, But I have to admit I don't want Twilight to get back with Dash. Stay with Blueblood!
Oookay, I'm rooting for Dash. I despise Blueblood.
we agree Dahling.
my votes for dashie! blueballs is an asshole!
I vote for Dash.(natch)
Blueblood is not worthy!
Dash, no, stahp! That's not how you do things.
As I have no background for, well, anything here, it seems that ditching Blueblood is a dick move. Unless he turns out to be a massive douche-bag, this seems forced. But I will continue on, it's promising and you have earned a favourite.
Well, this is interesting... Bluey isn't a jerk for once. A bit oblivious maybe.Stil rooting for him though.
I really hope that he won't turn into one, because that would feel rather cheap.
Also, you sometimes have two speakers in one alinea. If you start a new line for every character, it'll read more easily.
What if... What if... what if, somehow, Dash ends up with blueblood? That would be one of the biggest twists you could pull in this fic, and it ould be hilarious. Though I'm still rooting for Twidash. Looks good so far, keep up the good work!
hmm this shall be good.and come on rainbow dash. i'm rooting for you to get twi back.and blueblood?well he's an asshole.
OK, lets see how this goes.
Rainbow Dash has my suport and my axe, Blueblood can buck him self (the fact that she has been kissing with that jerk is gross
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And how Twilight, ended in love with that jerk?
I'm personally for Twidash myself. But I will admit i do like a Bluelight when they are explain away Blueblood's canon personality (based on his behaviour at the gala)
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Thank you for the suggestion about the speakers. I'll take that into account when I'm writing from now on. I'm 99% sure I knew that, but forgot since it's summer. xD
Spending time with your family is important, and I'm glad to hear you're back
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Did you all raise a barn? Glad you're back anyway.
dude, what happened to this story?