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Gaia was found by Celestia's father, adopting him into the royal family. He grew up with Celestia as his sister, his best friend, and best playmate. Once Luna was born, Gaia and Celestia grew up with her, adding another playmate to their adventurous group. They were the closest any three ponies ever could get. As they reached the end of their childhood, problems will ensue. Old relationships start to fall as new relationships arise. How will the three ponies handle the problems ahead in this Sad Romantic One Shot?

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*Disclaimers

-Set in an alternate universe because I'd rather have no arguments about the back story of MLP, so might as well make it so it doesn't conflict with the story AT ALL. (However, it does explain things in my OWN way > w < )

-Sad tag isn't really a main part of the story, so don't run away all you Sad Tag haters!! :( Don't worry, it gives the feels during the story, so it's not going to make you feel depressed... Or will it? ^~^

-There are a lot of time skips in this story, don't worry, I myself hate timeskips as well. I especially hate those pointless timeskips that leave you wondering what happened to everyone else or whatnot. These timeskips are only in place when literally there's nothing to write to fill them up without making this story 5000000 words. Hope you can still enjoy~

-First person (I know people don't like first person fics, including myself, but it gives the story a better feel.)

-Amazing, amazing coverart by the fantastic and generous Le-Surmulot

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 27 )
Comment posted by Mattricole deleted Jul 2nd, 2013

Oh, it's a Celestia and Luna story...

*slowly walks away*

I wrote one sadfic ever. I didn't like it. I read sadfics. I didn't like them. My prior knowledge tells me I won't like this either. I'll pass.

2812159
:raritydespair: Awh, it's not really them shipping though =\

2812204
Ah, alright then :twilightsmile:

2812264 Oh no, the idea never came to me, I just don't really like reading about them.

2812306
Ah, alright then :twilightsmile: That's fine

Bravo, bravo! Encore!
Best story I've read so far!
Yeah! Yeah!
:trollestia:
I'd put up a Luna emotion, but there is none.

Epic story!
I wish I could make a story like that!

P.S. If Luna had done a sacrifice spell and was not banished by Celestia, why did she threaten Ponyville?

2812338
Alternate Universe ~ :3

2812338
Glad you enjoyed it so much, btw! :twilightsmile:

Slightly confused, would Gaia die when the spell dissipates, or go back to Equestria as well?

O GOD THE FEELS! THEY BURN! WHY! WHY DO YOU INVOKE THESE EMOTIONS UPON MY SOUL, RAPPLEJACK! WHY!

Now I'm gonna go listen to sad music and cry myself to sleep.

2812352 actually, if Gaia dies at the end of the spell, then Luna's distress and rage could explain the canon plot line.

2813447
I left that up to you to decided :twilightsmile:

2813826
Glad you enjoyed~

I don't now if I would be the only one to think this. But I feel like there could be another story after this. I deep down think and hope that Gaia lives and comes back with Luna, not at the same of course. And the feels push me to tears reading it at the end. Keep up the great job, I really look forward to seeing more of your work.

2818510
glad I could make you enjoy reading the story :) . Who knows, maybe ill decide to make a sequel =/.. not too sure atm, and with chapter 9 really really bugging me, I might just stop writing stories loooool

2818545
Hey, I don't do that. I need to know what is going to happen to Rarity and Applejack. Don't leave a pony hanging here. Don't make me bag you not to stop.

2818553
its just hard typing up a story with no motivation, like I've typed 8 chapters and a real long one shot with zero motivation to do so, and now its taking a toll on my brain x.x

2818558
Then do what I do when something like that happens. I take a step back from that story and work on something else. Then out of nowhere it just hits you like a flash of lighting and boom. :twilightsmile:

2818575
yeah that's a good idea.. but I just wish there'd be another way, maybe if more people noticed my work and could give me more advice, it'd help me. Like so far there have been so many people helping me along the way which has helped me so much, and I'm really thankful, bit right now it halted a bit and there's not much to look forward to when releasing a new chapter. Like this, a sequel sounds nice but its so unnoticed that id have a hard time without help >~<

2818589
I know the feeling all to well. If it wasn't for you, my story would have never left my head. And if it wasn't for my other friend who edits my chapters before I posted them. I come to learn things will take time. I would have never thought in a thousand years that one of my stories would have over a 100 views. The number made me have this same look on my face. :derpyderp2: But I do know how hard it feels right now. Just know you have fans, we maybe small in numbers, but we truly love your work and look forward for each new story or chapter. So don't give up hope, things may seem to be going nowhere fast. Let's make a deal, if you promise not to give up on writing. I promise to keep working hard on my stories. Does that sound good to you?

2818634
oh no you don't, you'll continue typing stories no matter what. >:(.

2818664
Nope, not if your going to give up on me. Your story is what has give me the spark to keep writing. I look up to you. So if your going to stop writing on me. Then I feel that I should just do the same. You are one of the best writers I have read so far. So if you stop, then I stop.

2818675
how do I say no to that =/

2818685
You can, but that would hut and cause pain. I'm sorry, I just don't want to see you give up. You are very good and I truly want to see you keep going. I don't care if I have to wait a month or long to read the next chapter. I will wait cause your stories are well worth the wait. I can't make you do something you don't want to do. It will be sad to see you stop, but if that is truly what you want to do. Do what ever will make you happy in the end. I'm sorry for bugging you.

You know I don't cry much but omg I cryed

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