The Elements of Harmony were chosen to undergo a diplomatic mission for six of the ten nations that Equestria was divided into. Each with its own exports that other nations rely upon for survival, and vice versa. The Bearers of The Elements eventually drifted from the lives they once knew, and grew accustomed to the lives they lived in their respective nations very quickly. Now, seven years later in Applejack's capital city, Stalliongrad,, a guardspony for the Stalliongrad Civil Defence Force have his whole life go downhill, or underground actually.
Chapters (4)
Haven't played metro. Reading the hell outta this
Edit: I need MOAR. NAOW!!!!!!!!
Your story needs a short description as well.
I've onlylaged the first Metro, that was creepy as shit
2620438 But it was a pretty cool game...minus the creepy as shit mutants... O.O
2620387 This story needs a lot of things, but Ah'm working on some of them, but the short description is a reduced version of the long description, it's only about a sentence or two in difference.
2620368 Grab it on Steam. Ah already had the first chapter written on paper (Ah write these in my free time at school and the like) so Ah'll work on that later. Glad to see somepony's taken interest in it so soon...and just to the prologue alone...eheh...heh...oh boy, this'll be a fun ride. :D
2620387 Ah went back to look, and for some reason it didn't save the first time, Ah chock it up t'user defect, so thank ya fer alert'n me t'that! :)
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Yeah, I'm broke. Well, more reason to get a steam card!!!
P.S: welcome to the writing community
2620874 Thank ya kindly, and Ah know the feeling of being broke, but it was on Steam not too long ago for about...$15 Ah think???
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At my check it was $50
2620797 yeah, especially when you nuke the dark ones at the end
Got a mutnt problem? Nuke'em!
2621019 Ah said on sale didn't Ah? Meant to if Ah didn't, sorry hoss...
2622922 Ah didn't nuke'em, Ah wanted t'see what would happen, but of course it ended right there...and Bourbon...why Uncle Bourbon why?!
An interesting change of events, but it would be nice if we knew why or what these supposed leaders of the 9 or 10 states were attempting, and or thinking? Applejack could become rather furious, and power has been known to corrupt. However, I'm not sure on most of the decision making of the leaders of the military groups. The Crystal Empire, going to war with other bearers of the Elements of Harmony? The friends of her sister in law? Even, in power she showed few signs of corruption or change. I understand that you wish to base the story around the main characters and not on the other characters, but it would be nice.
2632475 Well to quote you, power corrupts, and they've been in power for, an by the time we come to the main character they've been in power long enough to, not become elders, but later in their years.
I'm working on the third chapter when I can get the chance to, but my laptop had the NEAR complete version of it when it decided it's time had come to go off into the great Best Buy in the sky... -.-
SO...had to start from scratch, it's nothing like the laptop's version but back to the real reason for this post: Between work, work II, work III and Fallout Equestria (even that's scarce time to read)...I have almost no time to continue, but I AM trying, I haven't given up on any of you nor will I...it'll just be months in between chapters sadly...
This is a crossover of something called "Metro", right? If so, then what is Metro? Also, why is this on hiatus and why does your profile say that you haven't written any stories?
2818557 Do you really have three jobs?