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Superswag420


Hello.

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Caution: This story is set in a version of Equestria where there are no Elements of Harmony. :)

Art by: http://www.kunomasu.deviantart.com/ (Sky Song)


Three ponies find that as time goes on, you can't stop entropy from increasing... This entropy is rising due to the release of the dark half of the Elements of Balance, the Elements of Entropy. Created by discord, these half of the elements were made to counter the other half of the elements known as the Three states of balance Order, Spirit, and Form.

Well now with the return of Discord, the Elements of Entropy have escaped hoping to find hosts and wreak everything in their path without anything stopping them. As the Second Law of Thermodynamics states... "Entropy of an Isolated system never decreases". In common terms saying once these element holders begin to wreak havoc in Equestria, the chaos will permanently increase... Which would be good and all for Discord, but as this chaos grows more and more ponies will get hurt.

Will the States of Balance find their rightful bearers? Will Equestria be freed from all this Madness?

We will just have to wait and see... :)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

Fun fact: Those are Fruit-Gushers on the cover.

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Then they would be some very expensive fruit gushers! XD

Good job. Much better, and I'm hoping for more soon.

Hey Sam, nice job on this chapter:pinkiehappy:
I had a thought though, Calm Storm seemed really quick to accept Order, and the other way around too. Maybe one thing you could do is have one of the characters not exactly trust their element and have to go through something with it to come to realize that this might be a good thing. But yeah, otherwise very good job.

2629356 One step ahead of you Jacob! I know what I'm doing XD

Oh and I've just been really tired to put out a chapter... I'll make one tomorrow!

Yah, Jacob's right. That kind of threw me off as well, but I forgot to mention it. :derpytongue2: Keep going though, and I can't wait till the next update. :pinkiehappy:

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