It was a sunny day in ponyville. Fluttershy was helping the birds sing. Rainbow Dash was clearing the sky. Rarity is making cloths in her shop with spike's help. Apple Jake is still bucking apples on the farm. Pinkiepie is still, well, Pinkiepie. And the princess Twilight is walking around ponyville with a smile on her face. But there are two other ponies that no pony knows. They came all the way from Manehattan. One of the ponies is the cousin Vinyl Scratch, he isn’t known for his music but he is known for his music… in weapons. This colt name is Beat Scratch. The other pony trained with Rainbow Dash in ponyville in the Ponyville dojo. He left the dojo to join Manehattan Street fighting. He was ganged by a bunch of other ponies. He looked back to his training with Rainbow Dash and used his magic to use his melee combat. He got his cutiemark back then. This pony name is Crazy Ceyz. This is their story.
How am I gonna know what you replied to me if you deleted the comment?
it's spelled Applejack not Apple jake!
Plus why did you delete? I was pointing out a mistake in your discription!
Deleting comments criticising you?
You're gonna have fun here.
2624208 I wasn't criticising , I was pointing out his misspelling of Applejack
2624221 That's... criticism. Constructive criticism. Pointing out flaws and explaining how it could be better.
2624224 I see criticising differntly then, when I criticise, I am a bit mean about it. When I'm just being friendly, I point out spelling mistakes every now and then.
I guess it's still criticism but I don't call it that
2624290 Well, whatever you call it, it's something this author needs to hear. Deleting your comments doesn't do him any good, and only makes him look bad. I'm on your side, you're doing the right thing. Keep it up as much as you can, with as many stories as you can. There can never be enough helpful voices out there.
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I personally can't wait until these comments are deleted.
2624329 It doesn't affect me what he does. You can lead a horse to water, and all that.
You know what you guys are right. So to be honest. People are going to talk crap or good things about it. So my bad.
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Honestly, you'll be better served the more you hear bad things so you know where to improve. The only time you should really delete comments is if they're spam.
2624442 True so sorry about causing trouble
2624499 it's ok, brohoof? /)
Obvious Gary Stu self-insert wish fulfillement story, don't want.
And Tragedy + Comedy tag
2624512 (\ brohoof