It was a normal day in a small town called Ponyville, The students went to school the parents went to work. It was a normal day. Until a strange fog appeared in the area. As the fog cleared a body was hanging upside down...dead. The murder of that pony turned this peaceful turn into a living chaos panic. A transfer student named Twilight Sparkle came from the big city. came to spend a whole year with her Brother Shinin' Armor little niece Sweetie Bell. Going to school at Tomodachi High school Twilight learns new things, meet new friends and maybe a little love.
Twilights new friends told her about this rumor about staring in a mirror at midnight and you're true love will show up. Twilight tried it that night. But something else showed up.. and her adventure starts. Right there.
might wanna add the AU tag
PERSONAPERSONAPERSONAPERSONA! SOCIALLINKSOCIALLINKSOCIALLINKSOCIALLINK!
XD I love Persona. This is gonna be hilarious.
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What's AU?
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Persona 4 was originally a PS2 game. Just letting you know.
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I know. I just got into the Persona world once I got my PSVita.
Persona 4 Golden was the first game I got and I really loved it. Now I wanna go back and play the others. Along with the spin offs as well
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I recommend Persona 3. I don't why a lot of people dislike it, but try getting Persona 3 Portable. Mind you it is a whole lot darker than Persona 4.
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I saw the trailer inside of P4 and I really want to see it. The whole shooting your head to let out your persona. And when it hit midnight everyone is in coffins. I really do wanna play P3
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Thanks. And Nice Catbug Pic. I'm also a fan of his
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The pistols, also known as Evokers, are the only way to summon Personas outside of the Midnight Channel. Persona 3 and 4 take place in the same universe. They only really meet up in Persona 4 Arena tho.
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Yeah, I saw that in there too
I'm liking this so far, it's just that some of the grammar is a bit shotty.
You might want to work on that. Some things that come to mind immediately are noun/verb agreement, run on sentences, and quotation marks incorrectly placed. But yeah, liking it. I could never get into Persona just because of the pacing issues. 
Don't get me wrong, 
I love the world and the characters and the story, and I love the dungeons and the turn based battling, but one thing I don't like was the social links. 
It's a great concept, but I didn't like going through a dungeon and the game really starting to pick up momentum just for that momentum to come to a screeching halt while I have nothing to do but build up social links for a good three hours. 
The pacing in that game is just really sporadic and it's what killed it for me. Hopefully reading a pony adaptation will remove that. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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It made me cry a bit is some parts to be honest
And on top of that. I kind of write in my book first then post it up here. So it looks longer within the book then it does on the site itself.
Well, sure as hell took me long enough to finally get around to reading the chapter. I'm still liking it. The problems I had before are still there. "Their self" should probably be "themselves" but okay. Also, is "Come one, come all and have some fun it's gonna be a ball!" the new "Every day's great at your Junes!"? Yeah, liking it. Liking it like I liked the source material. Can't wait for the next chapter.
.... WAT. :|