DISCLAIMER: This is not a Human in Equestria story!
My name is Jason Wheeler. At least, that's what I think my name is. I'm not sure about anything anymore. Everything is all messed up. I've only been on this island a few days, and something is getting to me. Maybe it's the heat. Maybe it's the anxiety. But I do know a few things for certain.
I might die here.
My family has no idea where I am.
Ponies don't talk.
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write more write more write more. please please please please please please please.
This is actually really well written. I'm definitely following this one.
My only nitpick is that it seems like Lyra should be the one saying "Oh really," in the last paragraph, but the second half sounds like something Jason is saying. You might need to split that into two quotes or change it up to have only one speaker.
you caught my interest
.......
now you have my attention.
this better not end like lost.
2581560 this is actually inspired by lost but no it will not end like that
2581682 thank god. I love how well it's coming, but the chapters, they do short.
2582287 my stories always have short chapters, that's how I write. I enjoy being able to tell a good story without extensive padding.
2582600 nice.
Well... This just got interesting... and a fav, and a
Awesome.
Awe. It was a great story.
Magic muthafucka.
Windup radio.
"Oh! Oh! Maybe you're in a parallel universe! Are you near a lighthouse?"
2694543 FINALLY someone else caught that lmao