It has been a year since Princess Luna returned from her exile, she adjusted to her new world and thought she was prepared for anything until she met a charming prince who swept her off her feet and stole her heart.
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You just went through the entire meeting and courtship phases of a relationship in under 2000 words. It should at the very least be ten times that.
Holy shit. This 'Lightning Prince' guy is a fucking player.
2639517 sorry this is my first story
Dont listen if they want adventure and stuff they could take a tag but yeah you could have made ita chapter longer but it was sweet!
2655592 thanks
I have to say that this story went in the rite direction but it move to fast for me to enjoy it. You need to work on more of the details and framework of the story to make it good. I hope this helps, on your next story you write.
Dragonfox
3128541 thx 4 the advice
I loved this story!!!!!!
3392812 thank you, be sure to check out the sequel
Awwww.... So beautiful!
4717914 Thank you