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Apple Planting

Somebody has to do the chores of planting the new apple trees in the spring. However, when the task falls upon a certain orange mare, she seems a lot happier than she should be about it.

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Twiggles6

Twiggles6 #1 · May 13th, 2013 · · ·

Aaaaaand... This is why I don't read dark fics.

Pretty well written. Just not my bag of apple seeds.

Spryzler

Spryzler #2 · May 13th, 2013 · · ·

Well... That filled my quota of creepy for today. Fantastic story and your first? Well done :)

Pinkderps

Pinkderps #3 · May 14th, 2013 · · ·

If this is your first story, it's very good! I'd have to say that it's rather mysterious but I still find it nice to read. Even a story with an ending that isn't truly clear can really affect how the story goes. Good job on setting the scene!

Comment posted by ForeverLunar deleted Nov 30th, 2015

ForeverLunar

ForeverLunar #5 · Nov 30th, 2015 · · ·

Hmm. I'm only slightly confused...
Did Applejack kill Sweetie and Scoots??

Fluttershy34

Fluttershy34 #6 · Mar 14th, 2016 · · ·

WOT DA BUCK!!! that was bucking creepy. i didnt understand until i thought about it. these 2 lines made me suspicious: ''the mare reached deeper inside the sack, where there were two final large objects.'' and ''Now she could get onto her other job. She had apple seeds to plant.''

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