After Pinkie Pie wins a chocolate factory, she invites her five other friends to have a look around... but 1 of them is in for a big surprise, one of the best prizes they've ever heard.
They just don't know it yet...
(Based on Charlie and the Chocolate Factory)
You seem to be galloping ahead with the plotline (no pun intended). You bring in each particular scenario and it's either everypony just being 'whatever' or a significant OOC moment in order to make the storyline fit.
So you're saying that I only put in the personality until the actual elimination, and that I need to indicate which character is which part of the story? 3098291
I love the song!
Songs!
You've outdid yourself!
Huzzah!
Songs!
Aww...
No songs...
Wait, shes giving the factory to Fluttershy?!
Awkward....
Awwwsheet!
Flutters vs 4th wall!
The pubic? THE PUBIC? WHY?
Other than that, good story. Jolly good show there, jolly good
RD blueberry inflation for the win!
What about Tim Burton, Johnny Depp, and Warner Bros.?
Blueberry Rainbow :3 My favorite type of RD, great job! I read this fic a long time ago and never commented on it for some odd reason. So I'm doing so now. Good job my friend!
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Ah yes, the Pubic. Put the gum all up in those hairs.
I am so sorry.