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Great start to what I assume will be a great story. I'll keep tabs on it.
AnD i DOnt KnOW WhY I'M saYing this but they should add a discord picture.
This is genius!!!!
2636754 I like to think sometimes
Love the new chapter dude!!!!
But if twilight came looking for me she'd get no answers, she always gets all holier the thou on everyone. So i would either say no and walk away or just walk away for the sake of being difficult, of which she still gets no answers :D
2653130 Dude I plan to make her work real hard for answers. A teen basically getting interogated, yea, right~
2653771 YES!!!! someone is making twilight work for it!!! in the ethical sense of the word you are my new hero, right up there at number 1 with David Tennant, and Cole McGrath
I feel honored to be ranked up there among the Doctor, bless his hearts. I am tired of the ponies just immediately getting their way with everything. Not with this teen with his cussing addiction. I will try not to make them cry..maybe
We just need to worry about Celestia and the big question, Wheres Discord?
I find this to be the right amount of power as well as a good chapter. loved the corrupted lugia thing makes me thing of Pokemon xd: Gale of Darkness
Man how awesome would it be to be in Jordan's shoes to have a timber wolf pack on your side to communicate with wildlife along bending nature with its terrain and plant life to your will! Never found a story like this before and I love it!
Jordan, one of the many other human badasses that I have found while reading HiE fanficd :)
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Glad ya like it, most Hie fics I find, they kinda overpower the guy and make him too godlike. My guy is just someone to stubborn to die.
I'm really just going with what feels right and what would make me say "Damn, I wish I was that Guy!"
2706420 certain fictional characters work as being godlike but we do need more stubborn characters that use their stubbornness to keep them going. This is what I like about Jordan as a character.
Well it was a bit rushed, but that happens sometimes, overall it was good, kinda like the fact that the main character is not over powered and is learning his abilities as he continue his journey. I would like it if you slow down the pacing a bit and allow the reader to enjoy some interactions with the characters, so dont go straight into a war, a good example is lord of the rings in which we get to understand the characters in the beginning and understand there reasonings on why there fighting, you almost did that but I feel you could have spend more time on that. Another thing Please if you can help it dont make celestia and luna gods, there not, they are just very powerful in magic and please no pinkie talking to the writer or anything like that, that just kills it for me. Though those are my opinions you dont really need to do that, its your story so you can do whatever you want with it, Sex, drugs, blood whatever its your story. If you need tips for writing take a look into this Important to all writers!
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Thanks for the tip, there won't be any fourth wall breaking, save for Discord. I'll see what I can do about slowing it down.
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I'm glad your're enjoying the story.
Hydra on his side? HAIL HYDRA!!
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Lets see what else he can convince to join him
2778069 I'm already hyped!
Great beginning, a different approach, in a good way
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Thanks, it really does mean a lot to me when the readers leave a comment about my stories, weather they be good or bad. I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters as well
3030336 Yet again you have created a masterpiece(meaning I think its beast!!!!!) of a chapter I can't wait for your next installment(meaning this freaking epic!).
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I'm glad ya like it, I was hoping that it wasn't over done.
when the guard shot jordon was just like bitch please
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You don't know how hard I'm laughing right now
Jordan is one best humans in equestria
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Thank you, you two. That really does mean a lot to me. I hope you'll enjoy the upcoming chapters
3057778 Freakin awesome chapter again man!
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I aim to please
don't tell rarity about the gem powers!
Raising gems and crystals? Dude I'd feel like freaking space godzilla! Make a fortress of solitude :D
That cliffhanger though.
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I love twilights logic:see something you never seen before in a dangerous forest. Go look for it :D
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She's a curious one for sure.
We need a theme song for this guy
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I like that idea, a lot.
Heh, so far I find this story hilarious. Also, as of this moment I expect Daring Do to suddenly pop out somewhere, claiming that that treasure is rightfully hers or either wondering how the hell he managed to get past all those traps before her.
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Its a Fanfiction, it might just happen
Another excellent chapter dude! Cant wait for more.
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I'm glad ya like it
Yes! This story has finally been updated
Finally a new chapter.
3707493 Haha I know right
I'll try to be faster
3706374 I'll do what I can to please
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I think you'll like what I plan on doing, lets say Jordan is gonna find some really BIG Aces
I Love IT!!!!!
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I'm happy to hear positive feedback
I like the new take on the Timberwolves.
