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Alright, I... have to just hit this straight away. The lack of formatting makes me want to eat a kitten. Seriously. a whole, live baby cat. I want BBQ kitty-bits. Puss will die because your inability to use indentations, paragraphs, and line breaks is producing carnivorous tendencies in complete strangers.
Fix. The. Text. Wall.
Then I may try to read this.
-Chessie
Love the premise, I like the way you portray Discord, his Ego is clearly in tact here. I enjoy most Discord fics.
But, Pretty please get an editor. The great wall of text can be a turn off to readers. even when the story looks like its going to be quite good.
You have the potential to create a very enjoyable fic here. Please continue.
1377526 yeah i hear ya but was kinda in a rush to post this. First time actually posting a story online so bear with me
1377577 Thank you its been a while since I've read a good Discord story so i quit waiting and took matters into my own hands. I'll work on that wall that i promiseand thanks for the constructive criticism
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No problem mate. I would like to see you finish this. :) You seem to grasp that awesome essence of discord right off the bat. Love it!
Of course Discord is my favorite character. And i will finish that's a given. What's i start something i gotta finish it>>1387565
The formatting is getting better. :) Just a word about characters lines though.. they should be set apart from the narration.
Discord was shocked yet again by this Pegasus. Galewing wore a smirk as Discord simply stared trying to comprehend
his day.
"Ahem, yes, um... Galewing was it, what was that thing about the worlds destruction again." Discord asked choosing to believe the Pegasus's word.
"Finally came to huh, guess you do have a bit of sanity in that head of yours."
I was a bit shocked at discord dealing with the timber-wolves, not in a bad way, He seems very bent on protecting "his" ponies.
Were they "sent" to fluttershy or was that just happenstance?
Anywho, I'm liking this and I hope you continue the story. :)
Remember i said that the Evil was influencing the beasts of the EverFree.
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Okay to all the readers yes i know i really fucked up on the first chapters format and i'll get to that...eventually.
So yea before you just give up on the first chapter at least read the others. Please
MORE!!!!
This story will be currently in storage while I get over writers block for this story. I am going to play with another idea and see what happens, no worries, this story will Not be cancled.
Writer block happens when the good stuff about to go down i hate that .Oh well i will wait i guess nothing better to do!
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I'm glad that you understand.