The formatting is getting better. :) Just a word about characters lines though.. they should be set apart from the narration.
Discord was shocked yet again by this Pegasus. Galewing wore a smirk as Discord simply stared trying to comprehend his day.
"Ahem, yes, um... Galewing was it, what was that thing about the worlds destruction again." Discord asked choosing to believe the Pegasus's word.
"Finally came to huh, guess you do have a bit of sanity in that head of yours."
I was a bit shocked at discord dealing with the timber-wolves, not in a bad way, He seems very bent on protecting "his" ponies. Were they "sent" to fluttershy or was that just happenstance? Anywho, I'm liking this and I hope you continue the story. :)
The formatting is getting better. :) Just a word about characters lines though.. they should be set apart from the narration.
Discord was shocked yet again by this Pegasus. Galewing wore a smirk as Discord simply stared trying to comprehend
his day.
"Ahem, yes, um... Galewing was it, what was that thing about the worlds destruction again." Discord asked choosing to believe the Pegasus's word.
"Finally came to huh, guess you do have a bit of sanity in that head of yours."
I was a bit shocked at discord dealing with the timber-wolves, not in a bad way, He seems very bent on protecting "his" ponies.
Were they "sent" to fluttershy or was that just happenstance?
Anywho, I'm liking this and I hope you continue the story. :)
Remember i said that the Evil was influencing the beasts of the EverFree.1408975