Alright, I... have to just hit this straight away. The lack of formatting makes me want to eat a kitten. Seriously. a whole, live baby cat. I want BBQ kitty-bits. Puss will die because your inability to use indentations, paragraphs, and line breaks is producing carnivorous tendencies in complete strangers.

Fix. The. Text. Wall.

Then I may try to read this.

-Chessie

Love the premise, I like the way you portray Discord, his Ego is clearly in tact here. I enjoy most Discord fics.

But, Pretty please get an editor. The great wall of text can be a turn off to readers. even when the story looks like its going to be quite good.
You have the potential to create a very enjoyable fic here. Please continue.

1377526 yeah i hear ya but was kinda in a rush to post this. First time actually posting a story online so bear with me

1377577 Thank you its been a while since I've read a good Discord story so i quit waiting and took matters into my own hands. I'll work on that wall that i promiseand thanks for the constructive criticism

1379437

No problem mate. I would like to see you finish this. :) You seem to grasp that awesome essence of discord right off the bat. Love it!

Of course Discord is my favorite character. And i will finish that's a given. What's i start something i gotta finish it>>1387565

Okay to all the readers yes i know i really fucked up on the first chapters format and i'll get to that...eventually.
So yea before you just give up on the first chapter at least read the others. Please