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K. so, even with my promise, I felt bad waiting so long to put more stuff up, so here. Have the first chapter of my newest idea.
So far,its a rather nice story,but I've heard stories of fluttershys shed....-shudders-
This is a cute story
How is it that bunnies can walk on clouds?
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I dunno, but it made things a little easier if they could. They never actually covered animals, just ponies.
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Yes. I incorporated to streamline that, I wouldn't actually have to think of all the ways Angel would screw around with Rainbow, because Fluttershy would keep him in line.
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Thank you for giving my story a chance.
I hope you continue to enjoy it as it rolls along. 
hmmm :D I can see your point...Maybe bunnies fluffy tails are so light and fluffy that they can float on clouds haha
Shed.mov refrence
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As I said before, the shed reference was merely a device to push the plot ever so slightly faster.
I don't know. While Rainbow wanting Fluttershy as a pet seems like an understandable concept and Rainbow wouldn't even spet out of her character, reversing the roles means that Fluttershy went downright psycho (all the more with that feeling-supressing-thingy).
It became a bit too dark for my taste and definitely not kind of story I hoped for from the first chapter BUT it is still very well written, so I will give it a chance (although if you decide to stick to original direction, I wouldn't mind at all
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Fluttershy's going crazy now. I'm awaiting that she turns out to be Pinkie from 'Cupcakes'. That'd give this whole thing a weird, yet awesome touch.
Like, what the fuck? still 4/5 Big Mac's tho
All of my this. Like, holy crap, I wasn't expecting any positive push from the direction I was looking at going. Nothing like this at all. I was expecting to have to trash the story after that, which I know, I shouldnt've posted it with that expectation, but really, I couldn't make it work the way I wanted it to, and it worked out a lot better in my head this way. It probably won't double back later and go back to original design, but thank you for the support :D
I will address that Fluttershy will be a lot more like the Fluttershy from the Iron Will episode than normal, but it won't be so out of character that she won't look like Fluttershy at all, if I can help it.
interesting....
The first chapter was kinda cool. I could see there was nice room for some lovely Flutterdash action coming up, perhaps even that night kind of thing.
but now... um... question... Is this going to be a Flutterdash story (I dont mind clop, or a bit of gore... if theres my fave ship involved romantically.) or just one where Fluttershy dominates Rainbow like some pet and they never get to have a proper relationship?.
After an explosive start im now aprehensive as to where this will go. For now you get a downvote and a follow but Im open for change.
So here's hoping.
Just give everything time to develop
I kinda figured that it wouldn't be taken well by everyone when I switched it around. 