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Riding the Equestrian Saddle

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sweet_dream #1 · Aug 5th, 2015 · · · 1: A Person, I Guess ·

Some of the pacing is a little shakey, but the character development is good. The grammar needs a bit of looking over, can't find the specific part again right now, but things in past-tense or present-tense need adjusting. Overall not bad and I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out.