ok so I got a response and found that when I submitted it I didn't have enough pony in it yet so I fixed that and it should ok now and be up within the next few days

also I decided that since I took so long I only did 2 chapters however I might add onto the 2nd chapter as I am right now undecided as to whether I am satisfied with the length so let me know in the comments if it feels short

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But an idea struck me while at work on Wednesday. I've been writing on it since, but it went from a simple joke to a 6k mess in no time at all. Honestly I think the idea is great and will encourage others to expand on it once it's posted. I hope to finish it by tonight, as I just finished Twilight's tour and am moving on to a party. The end is near, even if Vermintide is distracting me.

WE GO INTO THE STUPID NAO.

https://www.twitch.tv/mikesnipe/

I HAVE ALCOHOL LET US PARTY.

-pencil

It's Not "Gary-Stu," It's Combo-Man!

An unfinished story that anyone can take if they PM me.

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"What's the most important part of a story?" you might ask while wondering how to become a better writer. Well Tony, aka Gary Oak, has an idea. The idea that ideas are the most important part of good writing. With examples from Past Sins, A Game of Thrones, and more Tony explores why ideas are important and how to get them flowing.

Good day.

After being sick for a few weeks I'm back on the warpath. Today I finished uploading the last of Gary Oak's videos about

What Makes a Good Story part 3/3 Mechanics

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Rating Scale:

12/10—a complete masterpiece; flawless and outstanding
11/10—Excellent, near-perfect film
10/10—the standard rating; awesome film with a couple of flaws
9/10—a wonderful film with several flaws
8/10–a great film with numerous flaws but not enough to ruin it

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Scene Rating Scale:

9/9: Flawless! Outstanding scene!
8/9: Great scene! Totally Rewatchable!
7/9: Pretty good. Not as perfect as I expected though.
6/9: Decent. Doesn’t ruin the movie/episode.
5/9: Mid.
4/9: Pretty bad. One of the weakest scenes of the movie/episode.

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What’s up, guys! I’m back with another review.

Today, I’ll be reviewing “Free State of Jones”.

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I personally have nothing against people who are voting for whoever they want to vote for in this election. I know people have their various reasons for voting for Trump, Stein, Clinton, Johnson, or anybody who is going to be on the ballot this year. America is all about the freedom to choose and everybody has a right to pick who they want as the leader of our nation.

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I just did the Destiny 2 beta.

OH MY FUCKIGN GOD IT WAS AWESOME.

Captain America titans, Dominius Gary, the whole nine yards of it was amazing.

It sucks that there's only one strike and two crucible modes you can do in the beta, but I like the new weapon customization system, the armor and weapons, the subclasses, everything.

I'll see you (hopefully) in september, when we get the full Destiny 2 game.

Ciao!

Mkchief34

Yo, what's up, Kemosabes?

This is your friendly film, TV show, and episode reporter here with another review.

Today, for the first installment of this year's "Christmas in July" series, I'm gonna give you guys my take of "I'll Be Home For Christmas". The 1998 Disney film starring Jonathan Taylor Thomas, to be precise.

Here's the rundown of it:

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New video on my channel from Gary Oak on What Makes a Great Story Part 2/3 Execution

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Rating Scale:

12/10—a complete masterpiece; flawless and outstanding
11/10—Excellent, near-perfect film
10/10—the standard rating; awesome film with a couple of flaws
9/10—a wonderful film with several flaws

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Hey guys!

Well, here it is. Today, following my latest review, I will be reviewing Beauty and the Beast! The 1991 animated version to be precise.

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https://www.deviantart.com/silverstarapple/art/The-Virgin-Displaced-VS-The-Chad-Infinite-Loops-758643110

Rating Scale:

12/10—a complete masterpiece; flawless and outstanding
11/10—Excellent, near-perfect film

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April Fools Day, Kemosabes!

This is your friendly film, TV show, and episode reporter here with another review.

Today, to celebrate this momentous occasion, I'm gonna give you guys my 16th take on an installment of the Scooby-Doo franchise: "Scooby-Doo and the Cyberchase".

Here's the rundown of it:

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Hey there reader wanna be as popular as me? Of course you don't. Aim higher for God's sake. That said there are two pieces of wisdom I want to pass on to you. That's right, a guy who in any writing contest is a permanent resident in the cellar (actually I don't mind it down here because typically I just send in rough drafts and at least I didn't get first place) has writing advice.

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