The Importance of Mechanics in Writing (with examples from Past Sins)

Good day.

After being sick for a few weeks I'm back on the warpath. Today I finished uploading the last of Gary Oak's videos about

What Makes a Good Story part 3/3 Mechanics

Gary has improved a lot sense his first video and he does a great job editing parts of Past Sins on screen so you can see what he is talking about in the story. He really goes all out explaining why certain things don't work and why certain things can work.

Gary also covers why the mechanics of writing matter so much, how it affects the editing process, and touches on how mechanics can vary based on your audience.

Hope you enjoy it.