This next part of the series is a short but sweet wrap up for something I wanted to get to with Chrysalis and a set up for what comes next. Enjoy the continuation.

EAll That We Become: A Part of the Family

• MLP: FiM
• Slice of Life

After being invited for a visit to the Crystal Empire by Cadence, Chrysalis is suddenly left to spend the day with Shining Armor and Flurry Heart at the traveling fair.

• Cadance
• Shining Armor
• Chrysalis
• Flurry Heart

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Twilight upon noticing her brother's royal guard armor.

TS: Yeah, I think it's a little too "LATE" for protection now, don't you?!

So... I haven't been to bed in roughly... what, thirty hours? I get weird when I'm tired. I start slurring my words, I will trip over every goddamned thing between here and the bathroom, including invisible turtles... and I forget important information.

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I underestimated how many people would want more than 10! So I redid the poll, adding an 'other' option. Just type in a simple number so it'll count it right. I'll choose a number around the average of where most people chose. Anyway, how many offspring should result from Shining X Chrysalis' activities during Canterlot Wedding?

Also, how should the offspring come about? External eggs, live birth, or implanted eggs?

New chapter is done. Maybe I'm in a weird mood but it just reads strangely to me. Can't tell if it's fine or the writing really is weird...

Chapter's done and I hope you enjoy it!

So, last week gave me a roller-coaster of difficult obstacles to overcome, and I rode it to victory, but...

I'M RUNNING DRY ON IDEAS!!! Particularly of the stories attached. That's why I'm reaching out to my audience to offer a chapter idea for any story attached to this post.

The Rules are fairly simple and to the point:

1. Has to obey FiMFiction.net's rules for story creation(as with all stories created on here!)

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Today, I released Chapter 3 of Flurrysitting 101, which focuses on Shining Armor, Flash Sentry, and Applejack's struggle to find Flurry Heart as a mysterious threat lurks around the Crystal Empire's streets. It was a very fun chapter to write, and serves as the introduction of the everypony's favorite flying squad: the Wonderbolts!

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Holy crap this chapter took more work than chapter 8, despite being like half the size. I used to have this nasty issue of glossing over something that I didn't feel like explaining at the moment or planning on explaining later then forgetting. I didn't take good chapter notes as I went along.
*spoilers if you haven't read chapter 9*

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"I figured it out. Pink Floyd is the equivalent to getting a message on your brain." - from Dragan232

Howdy, folks! First and foremost, as always, Adorable Applejack:

Now then...

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Honestly, there wasn't a whole lot wrong with this chapter. Mostly some bland descriptions and not setting the mood properly.

Okay this time I admit I abused the "I did this..." rule a tone. There were other random sections where I knew I had a purpose for them at the time, but after rereading it, I had no idea what they were reffering to. I spruced up some of the descriptions, as a lot of it felt kind of...basic. I added in more emotion and tried to really drive home hoe the current predicament was psychologically messing with the Taraskans.
Hope you all enjoy and as always, thanks for being a fan!

Aaaaand there we go! This chapter was a little more tricky. I had some confusing numbers in the squads and made some writing errors. Also there was some context confusion about who was doing what. not sure if anyone noticed or cared, but I did. Tried to make it a lot more gut-wrenching and heart-breaking.
SPOILERS if you haven't read past this chapter.

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Okay so my ending plot points are just...super messed up and I have to fix them. There's a lot of " Situation A needs to happen so person B can save person A, but person B can't get there until situation B and AAAAAAAHHHHH!
I thought I had resolved this, but when I started writing the chapter, I realized there's a few vital details I missed and changing ONE changes like three others so I'm taking time to figure it out.

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Okay...it's almost here. I'm not gonna give numbers, but I'm so close to marking KOTD book 1 as completed. Like I'm on the home stretch where a lot of chapters are prewritten scenes from back when I first started writing KOTD. This point until the end is planned out storywise, with plenty of room for me to add new stuff. I'm so excited but a tad sad to see book 1 be done and over with. With the next chapter, I'm gonna crack down and edit a few more chapters.

Okay so I found like...two errors in this one. There wasn't anything wrong with it, and it's been that way for the last two chapters, so I think the worst is over. My main focus though, was to lengthen the chapter. It was sitting at a cringy 1600 words give or take. So I added about another 600. There's more plotting and predicting, as well as our heroes learning more about the world they're in. I think it looks a lot better, and I'm rather happy I decided to edit it tonight. My work keyboard

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A villain might just have a bright future in today's story.

Glow In The Dark, Shine In The Sun
[Equestria Girls] [Drama] [Slice of Life] • 27,035 words

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Have I been working on King of the Dead? Yes. Has it all been on the next chapter? No. The next chapter is like 90% of the way finished, but I keep getting these huge urges to work on some of the final chapters, which in my opinion, are going to be super badass. Thank you for being patient!

Progress on the next chapter is going well, but I'm having a hard time finding just the right music to help me write. I need something that pairs well with telling a sad story.