KOTD Chapter 9 done · 8:10am Oct 18th, 2017
Holy crap this chapter took more work than chapter 8, despite being like half the size. I used to have this nasty issue of glossing over something that I didn't feel like explaining at the moment or planning on explaining later then forgetting. I didn't take good chapter notes as I went along.
*spoilers if you haven't read chapter 9*
So Raiden kinda just...casually mentions the Og Nag and that's that. It felt extremely unrealistic. So I made him have to tell Celestia and Luna outright in an actual scene. I changed some dialogue so they felt more realistic and dramatic.