KOTD Chapter 19 edited · 10:47am Jan 14th, 2018
Okay so I found like...two errors in this one. There wasn't anything wrong with it, and it's been that way for the last two chapters, so I think the worst is over. My main focus though, was to lengthen the chapter. It was sitting at a cringy 1600 words give or take. So I added about another 600. There's more plotting and predicting, as well as our heroes learning more about the world they're in. I think it looks a lot better, and I'm rather happy I decided to edit it tonight. My work keyboard is so sticky, it fatigues my hands. Regardless, I said screw it as ideas flowed into my brain. Hope you enjoy!