I go into every story hoping for something that will be worth commenting on. Unfortunately, not everything warrants prolonged critiquing. This is especially true of fanfiction, where many writers are still learning and improving. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences or less. All of these stories were found via the featured or popular boxes. Unlinked stories are rated M and are extremely NSFW: they may be found via the author links.
First part was a shaky but promising start, let's move on to see how things development.
Hey, guys. Apparently there is this quiz going around FIMFiction. I'm going to do it, but instead of me actually doing it, I'm going to have 'The Critique' do it instead. Since tomorrow is another review, I figured I'd give you guys an extra day of his antics. So, let me know what you think. Anyway, enjoy.
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Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.
Hello, everypony! I am the Critique.
Rarity and Gilda... I've seen odder pairings from this series so far, let's take a look.
Art by Jay Fosgitt, ho boy. Story by Georgia Bell? Doesn't sound familiar, let's go check the Wiki... oh, wow. She's only done one comic before, Friends Forever #8 which I didn't read. Makes me nervous but I'll give her a shot.
We're back from the mid-season hiatus! This time I'm purposefully going into things blind, I saw one or two season teasers but no more. I've even spoiler hidden the rest of the episodes on Derpibooru. So, how was our first one back?
I go into every story hoping for something that will be worth commenting at (great) length on. Unfortunately, not everything warrants prolonged critiquing. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences or less.
Okay, so, I'm not coughing up as much blood as before, and as such, I do plan on getting back to writing. It turned out to be my allergies double-teaming me with their good old friend the Flu. Got to love allergies, right? At least now know the blood loss is not from my throat, as all this phlegm has resulted in a bit of dehydration that's caused some nosebleeds. Well anyway, now that I've managed to get into a better state medically, even if I'm still hacking, my silly little brain came up
We finally return to my series of critiques about the ISII entrants. We continue down my list of “finalists”: stories which I considered awarding points to. I would like to stress, however, that I only ranked them because FanOfMostEverything made me; they are all excellent.
I've suspected for a while that I would not be able to critique every story in the contest. At least not in long form. I suppose we'll cross that bridge when we get there.
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